Review Detail of sinful_life in Cliche Fanfic with Multiverse Travel. (Indefinite Hiatus/Dead)

let me tell you whats wrong not only is the writing quality is mediocre at best which can overlooked as a new author but: 1-in the start MC is shown as stupid and shallow as it apears from the 3rd wish but to know some women for less than two weeks make them fall in love with you in same time lose his v****ty card with all of them at same time even h**tai protagonist can't do this let alone normal transmigration person 2- a person doesn't share every secret in his normal life to people even if they are his lovers or even his most trusted confident let alone secrets to his own transmigration ,systems,super powerand his other abilities and that to people he only knew for less than 2 weeks not only that but he gave them powers and items like snap and share it 3- the world is seriously under developed as it seems all the world security can't stop a single house elf from stealing all he wants from the world's Banks and every woman and man is seriously one dimensional in character (seriously even 2d women in dating games have much more character and reality to them) ___ the previous was about what caused my head to nearly overload __ (but the overall idea about the MC , his harem's women , the world he is in and will travel to , his 1st & 2nd wishes are good) seriously couldn't you have transmigrated the mc a few years before anything allowing him some time to seriously adapt and think about his possibilities as a transmigrator .