Ok this story is in no way shape or form a masterpiece, the way the MC gets his girls is stupid and unbelievable đ. The system and the D&D spell system is so sensless it is nearly a parody moreso because it D&D 3.5 like the worst one of the bunch. The writing quality isn't that great either, not impossible bad but yeah fluid is something else. But the most important thing, did I have fun reading it? Yeah shure did, just get a few drink and don't think to much about stuff and it's a fairly enjoyebel read. Don't expect great storytelling it's basically Smut with a bit of story In it , but hey if the mood gets you for something like that why not.
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