Review Detail of Ritankar_Sarkar_ in HER VENDETTA

Well, I can see the skill of the Author being flowing through the story- and I find that she is really adjusted on writing a large scaled chapter very easily. My suggestions- 1.Kindly Check the text lengths of your paragraphs- they become too bulky for the eyes to read along. 2. Try giving cliff hanging situations more. 3. Build up more suspense and boost up the intriguing-ness of the initial Chapters. 4. Re-visit and Re-edit your initial chapters, because even if you don't correct the later chapters- the readers mostly get adjusted to the story in the initial Chapters. 5.That's it, Good Luck!