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Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv53yrBogdan7

It has poor grammar .... things keep happening and are not explained, they are just left there .... first I tought the author is doing it on purpose but after 30 chapters there are more and more things piling up, in a bad way..... and the mc is just badly written, I dont know if he is supposed to be so stupid because he had enough opportunities to find out what is going on or at least some things but its like he is avoiding the questions ....

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VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER

TheNeorav

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TheNeorav
TheNeoravAuthorTheNeorav

What are the things you actually wanted to be explained? The story was built in that way and that's what actually drives the mc. Well anyway, that's your opinion after reading thirty chapters. Well, thanks for dropping it man. It's better than hearing complaints and thumbs up for the review. I wish you read my warnings and proceeded to read the book since I clearly mentioned mc's attitude and character both in the synopsis and the auxiliary chapter.

TheNeorav
TheNeoravAuthorTheNeorav

Ohh forgot to tell you this, man. Don't wanna offend you but, I checked your profile... To be honest all you do is whine about the story. well, I know mine isn't likable for the first sixty chapters to most of the people that's that. but, you can always quietly drop a book if you don't like it. Since you seem to in pursuit of reading books and always end up reading one that you don't like. Just stop whining man.

Bogdan7
Bogdan7Lv5Bogdan7

not offended and the majority of the reviews I leave are negative because those are the stories that make me leave a review, if I think a story is decent I won't make one.... and as I said again and again......if people don't criticize your work you would start to think it's good .... and there are enough stories with over 4 star score with a horrible grammar, character development and story building, mostly due to fake reviews....