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Author is very helpful in answering questions/comments troughout the story but this review is about the book not the author. Warning- some spoilers Im at chapter 50- sometimes the mc care about people(he kills his own faction guy for raping women) then 2 chapters later he force 20 people to suicide. One second he make a deal with the most cruel god to sacrifice one hundred souls then the next he want to save 4 prisoners.. This MC sooo wishy washy mentality its a joke Second he is constantly abandoned and hunted by everyone and everywhere he goes, in the first 30 chaps women spit on him, push his head into ground and whip him and then men pee on him...After he survive that he meet a women who told him she was watching everything and made a deal with her to help her lmao without even knowing anything about her nor the world he is in.. he trust to easy.. not to mention im at chapter 50 yet he doesnt even know how to use basic mana/how to fight /how to use his powers/how to use his system. Also EVERYONE he meets call him newbie because he is stupid and doesnt know anything yet he does 0 eFfort to learn anything. Sigh my conclusion great story but worst worst wordt most stupid frustrating mc possible

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VENGEANCE OF THE RETURNER

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TheNeorav
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The first 60 chaps will be hateable... I mean like a lot. But remember Mc was still learning at that point. He will show a satisfying growth after those simultaneous suffering. I as the author knew what I was doing. It was made that way in order to show an understandable growth and an appreciable growth (From my opinion and point of view). His beginning of coldness and ruthlessness starts from 81st chap. The things he will do from that point will not be justified. You can expect madness from him and a crooked mindset. he will do what he feels right.

Weezyf
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I understand your point of view. its all just like all the others had the same exact starting point as him you know? Nobody suffered like he did, nobody suffered from morality like he did, atleast its not mentioned. Not only is he always called newbie(nobody taught him anything) but somehow he carries everyone and saves the more experienced people? Not to mention how he trust that btch Ferishina who does things to him without explaining and mc is like whatever.. serieusly after Everything you go trough its just whatever? Anyway These just my ramblings. At ch 80 I feel indeed he finally become a bit more selfish but he still to much hero saving innocents and getting himself in trouble because of it(draconion idiots for example) also no explanation about soul contracts/covenant (fukin important in my opinion ) ah whatever ill stop complaining and just read on and adjust my review after further chapters Thanks for taking time to reply!

TheNeorav:The first 60 chaps will be hateable... I mean like a lot. But remember Mc was still learning at that point. He will show a satisfying growth after those simultaneous suffering. I as the author knew what I was doing. It was made that way in order to show an understandable growth and an appreciable growth (From my opinion and point of view). His beginning of coldness and ruthlessness starts from 81st chap. The things he will do from that point will not be justified. You can expect madness from him and a crooked mindset. he will do what he feels right.
TheNeorav
TheNeoravAuthorTheNeorav

No others went through a smooth and easy path and not like him. Most Outlaws are not made to suffer as he suffered. Many Outlaws hold stories of their own and some people start off as an Outlaw, to begin with. In Mc's case, he was abandoned too soon before he could learn anything, and moreover, he didn't know much about how things work as an inexperienced person, he had to go through multiple scenarios. He is mostly self-thought while other outlaws had someone \ a clan \ their former days as regulars to mentor them and get some experience. Well, In any case, I am glad that you read to that extent. I hope you will read more to know where the mc goes and how he develops.

Weezyf:I understand your point of view. its all just like all the others had the same exact starting point as him you know? Nobody suffered like he did, nobody suffered from morality like he did, atleast its not mentioned. Not only is he always called newbie(nobody taught him anything) but somehow he carries everyone and saves the more experienced people? Not to mention how he trust that btch Ferishina who does things to him without explaining and mc is like whatever.. serieusly after Everything you go trough its just whatever? Anyway These just my ramblings. At ch 80 I feel indeed he finally become a bit more selfish but he still to much hero saving innocents and getting himself in trouble because of it(draconion idiots for example) also no explanation about soul contracts/covenant (fukin important in my opinion ) ah whatever ill stop complaining and just read on and adjust my review after further chapters Thanks for taking time to reply!