Review Detail of UnknownPervert in one piece I can become stronger by drinking wine

you should make title for chapters to make it look more appealing for the reader

Would be nice for the Mc to have a Origin story. Imagine how funny it would be if Mc was Luffy Age and be keeps sneaking alcohol from shanks crew. Over time Mc just keeps getting stronger and stronger and we'll. A drunk rampage.... Maybe give him a drunken fighting style for each weapon 😂 The drunken Fist.... drunken sword style

Besides that just fix your paragraphs/A few Grammar errors Maybe a few Starter chaps so we can see how Mc got to this point. Plus would be fun to see the young Mc drinking/Sneaking alcohol from people to get stronger

not sure it's possible for that to happen with a fanfic being translated with google translate from a chinese site.

nice like it pls do more here and Ur other one more here tho :)