Review Detail of It_Is_Me_Ttt in A Highest Rank in Another World!

First, thanks for this book. Here is my review; **************************************** The story and world background, power system and the system item has a very good concept. The idea behind it is great if you understand what the author is trying to portray. The same applies to the character. But here are the challenges; Though, there is a very good concept, the way they are executed are poorly done. The characters feels plain, the descriptions are the same. The emotions aren't shown or are almost nearly non-existent. For example, Lucian or rather the main character of this story is supposed to be a veteran, an S rank adventurer but the way he is written as makes him look more of an amateur than a veteran. His thought process is almost like a kid, and even kids have emotions but we readers didnt feel any. For example 👇 Another example is him getting betrayed, we as readers didnt feel the emotion behind it, it just felt bland like what bread without butter. The pain, the sorrow, the anger, fear of having to end his life here without fulfilling his future goals, mix of joy remembering himself with companions in the past along with fear of the betrayal. We, the readers didnt see any of these, so it undermined the scene and story. After having been betrayed by your closest companions, one who except to be wary of a 2nd act but Lucian as a character still act naive even with all his memories. **************************************** Well, that's my thought on what can be improved on. Except making 'personal' comics for fun, I have never written nor publish any books. So I can't correct nor do I have the right to say this is bad. In fact, this book really has a good concept but it needs massive improvement for its true potential to bloom. About the grammar, I didnt talk on tha because everyone starts from somewhere and definitely you will improve along the way. **************************************** Also, all my comment is base on the first 15 chapters. I know nothing of the next 100 chapters. And it will obviously improve by then. Another thing, I rate update as 5 star because I can't play unfairly. I only started reading this book, and there is already over 300 chapters, so it will be bad to rate that too low. Anyway, goodluck Auuthor, and we hope for the best. Lookimg forward to your improvement.