I had to remove the other version for some reasons, but I still count on everyone's support. And of course, I will also give 5 stars for this novel, even though I didn't think it would if this novel is from other people.
IgorRSAWs
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LIKELoliput:When will the romance start in the end of the story or the beginning?
Loliput:When will the romance start in the end of the story or the beginning?
Kurdi123:You Trash bitch Author why died you not say why the Trash Mc died. Fuck you You ar no human being. You are just the reason shit is called shit
SNS27:**grammar has left the chat** **trash talking to a good author has entered the chat**
I just couldn't get past the second paragraph of the second chapter.... not sure if it's intentional, or the actual level, but reading this feels like I'm reading something a 5 year old wrote. what did it for me was the extremely bland description of the "wonderful white world". being someone that has literally read 1000s of books, this one is just too painful to try to read through.
⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠉⣀⠈⠉⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⡄⠄⠉⠙⠓⢦⡀⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠛⠛⠉⠋⠄⣠⣤⣄⠄⠄⠂⠤⣄⠈⠳⣄⠄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⠁⠄⣰⣶⣦⡀⠻⣿⣿⣷⣄⠄⠄⢸⡆⠄⣿⠄⠄⠈⠉⠻⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡿⠁⢠⣴⣶⣌⠹⣿⣿⣷⣍⠻⣿⣿⣶⣄⠄⠄⠄⠄⣰⣾⣶⡆⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣇⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣧⡈⠻⣿⣿⣷⣌⠻⣿⣿⣷⡄⠄⠄⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⢀⣠⣀⠙⢿⣿⣷⣄⠻⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣷⠄⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⠸⢿⣿⣷⣌⠻⢿⣿⣦⣈⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢟⣡⣾⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠟⠋⠁⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣷⣄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠁⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⠠⡆⠄⢰⡀⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣏⠸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⠄⢻⡀⠈⠳⣤⡄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣷⣄⠄⠑⢦⣄⣀⡀⠄⢀⠄⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⠏⠄⢠⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣄⠄⠈⠉⠁⠄⣸⣿⣄⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠃⠄⣠⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣄⡀⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿
Steven_Smith_1510:I just couldn't get past the second paragraph of the second chapter.... not sure if it's intentional, or the actual level, but reading this feels like I'm reading something a 5 year old wrote. what did it for me was the extremely bland description of the "wonderful white world". being someone that has literally read 1000s of books, this one is just too painful to try to read through.
not sure what exactly that is supposed to be...I apologize if you took my review as an insult, but I still stand by what I wrote. in no way was I bashing the author, or the story itself, I was just simply stating how the story made me feel while reading it.
IgorRSAWs:⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠟⠉⣀⠈⠉⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠿⠿⡄⠄⠉⠙⠓⢦⡀⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠛⠛⠉⠋⠄⣠⣤⣄⠄⠄⠂⠤⣄⠈⠳⣄⠄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡟⠁⠄⣰⣶⣦⡀⠻⣿⣿⣷⣄⠄⠄⢸⡆⠄⣿⠄⠄⠈⠉⠻⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⡿⠁⢠⣴⣶⣌⠹⣿⣿⣷⣍⠻⣿⣿⣶⣄⠄⠄⠄⠄⣰⣾⣶⡆⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣇⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣧⡈⠻⣿⣿⣷⣌⠻⣿⣿⣷⡄⠄⠄⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠃⢀⣠⣀⠙⢿⣿⣷⣄⠻⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣷⠄⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⠄⠸⢿⣿⣷⣌⠻⢿⣿⣦⣈⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⢟⣡⣾⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠟⠋⠁⠄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣷⣄⢹⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠁⣼⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⠠⡆⠄⢰⡀⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣏⠸⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⠄⠄⢻⡀⠈⠳⣤⡄⠄⠙⢿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⢻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠇⠄⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣷⣄⠄⠑⢦⣄⣀⡀⠄⢀⠄⠙⠿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣾⣿⣿⣿⣿⠏⠄⢠⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣶⣄⠄⠈⠉⠁⠄⣸⣿⣄⠄⠈⠻⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠿⠃⠄⣠⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣦⣄⡀⠄⠄⠄⠄⢀⣠⣴⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿