Review Detail of Duckman in Game of Thrones: The Sun of Winter

Not really good. The English is terrible and there is no logic in the writing. The Stability of Updates is good, but just that, good. Story Development is alright, though yet again, thee is no logic. Character design don't get me started. a seven year old looking 15?! What are you thinking!? at best he should look ten. World Background makes me want to puke. you made a story that is vibrant with Background suck. I suggest learning English until you are on par with a native speaker, I am southern so I have to type like a Northerner to typically be legible. Try it like that. I also suggest reading LOTS of books. I was total trash before reading alot. Don't go in without practicing. Another piece of advice is to reread your works before publishing. I have a hard time remembering to do it, but my best chapters are when I rewrite what I got wrong. I also suggest Grammarly, it can help a lot with that. I'm using it right now! I hope that you pause and redo most of the story, it needs it.