alright well let's get started writing quality - I gave it a 4 for one reason everyone messes up so 5 is just likely pretty solid grammar tho story development - very nice so far character is from hp transported to got, and it's done very well character design - I really enjoy this I love the character personally updating stability - so far it's been pretty solid so a 5 even though I usually give 4's for this world background - now I was originally going to give it a 3 because it's a fanfic so you can't expect much, but I personally think they did very well in doing this although I could just be biased since I already know the world lore so overall 4.4 it's good I hope he/she doesn't drop the story
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