Review Detail of amaturewriter in Game of Thrones: The Sun of Winter

Idea is dope, so is story. wizard MC from HP in GOT. no MC acting overly good, no cringe speech moments [as of C3 ], no retarded moments. dope. MC is presented as a planner and someone with brains and a war veteran. hope MC uses modern sciences and magic for magic and will be both intelligent and ruthless. Make him a planner and manipulator. I really hope he is more brains than brawn cause thats what intrigued me. a wizard soldier from our world in GOT Author, the thing that kinda ruins bks like urs is that the MC becomes god, he can do anything anytime and has no conflicts or anything. wants crops, do runes and magic and terra form, want loyalty? mind read and enslave [ thats what happens in HP SI MC in GOT FF's, they more or less gain control over the world within months to 1 or 2 yrs]. try to avoid this. make him OP, thats dope, but dont make him do shit without any trouble. give conflict and shit. IDK, a time limit to do magic or something. any relationships just build, no rush. dont make MC a idiot that falls for pretty chicks that tries to gain their attention, i mean he lived 2 lives and was a war veteran, this dude is more enlightened than anyone in this world. and dont make lovers useless sluts. other than that GL.