Review Detail of BIGO_NIGO in In My Hero Academia with Madara Uchiha’s Powers(Dropped and rewriting)

As a fellow writer i want to give you some tips 1. use correct language and grammar, a.e say you, you guys or you all instead of yall and cause or because instead of cuz 2. before you write the chapter take a few minutes to plan what you are going to do in the chapter and why you want to do it 3. dont overexplain everything the mc does and why he does it. keep some mystery 4. DONT RUSH for the live if God do not rush, I know wanting your mc to be super op and to do super awesome stuff like sending a meteor on a ant or somthing but you have to take some time. same with the relationships dont just make a girl fall for him in the span of 10 minutes. it's fine if you so it with someone the mc really loves but only once or twice if you do it with every harem member it will seem rushed. 5. Use a grammar checker when you have written the chapter. I use grammarly cause it's free and good. and always proof read your chapters. I know it's boring reading somthing you have just written but you really have to read it to make sure it's good. That's all for now, I will give some tips when I see that you need them also I also love the madara in mha but what made that good was the pacing, it took the author 98 chapters and he still isn't on the battle between all for one and all might dont take this criticism personally because I simply want this story to be as good as possible