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MarkoJinn
MarkoJinnLv142yr
2023-02-06 04:51

The story was good from the start, the plot was not bad and the character and power of MC grew pretty nicely but the quality just dropped so hard after chapter 40 that I can't bear to read it anymore.

Monster Synthesis Master

Zhuge Wanjun
3.7
1078 Chs

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TheDolphin
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Qidian has turned self aware Also first

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Daoist_Butterfly
Daoist_ButterflyLv13

Very similar to The Legendary Mechanic. Same Virtual Reality concept with more or less similar protagonists. More Chinese humor that doesn't make sense. Pretty solid character development. Story has hinted towards progressing towards space.

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Xhaare
XhaareLv15

Well, we all know what the next editor’s choice is going to be...

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Etlitch
EtlitchLv14

Atlas Studios so I already know without reading it that after chapter 40 it'll be straight mtl without any editing. Stay away from Atlas Studios because they've ruined two novels that I actually tried before having to drop at 41 due to this. Also, I mean how can someone actually release 70 chapters a week, you have to be kidding.

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Mr_HonestReview
Mr_HonestReviewLv3

Don't waste your time. Atlas Studios, so I already know without reading it that after chapter 40 it'll be straight mtl without any editing. Stay away from Atlas Studios because they've ruined many of the novels that I actually like but I have to drop due to this.

2yr
JSX
JSXLv12

It was pretty decent, up till chapter 40. The translation quality gets significantly worse from chapter 41 onwards.

2yr
Nick_Kit
Nick_KitLv15

I’ve never really written a review before but here goes. Don’t get me wrong this book is good but after chapter 40 the book’s translation just get worse. Like all the chapters you have to unlock, names are forgotten, misuses of gender are all over. So you never know who is a man or female unless its before chapter 40 then you have some clue. The story is good but it just sucks that because of how sloppy the translation gets it makes it a lot harder to read.

2yr
Quiescent_Rumble
Quiescent_RumbleLv4

Some chapters after the 40th suddenly the quality of the translation goes down like crazy. If there is one sentence where the gender is used correctly you feel lucky. It is not just he/she, someone is suddenly even an "it". This is a new low.

2yr
Mythfury
MythfuryLv6

If you love TLM then give it a try. This Novel is quite good. similar to TLM. by the way congratulations 👏 our webnovel finally become system.

4yr
Xrucible
XrucibleLv2

Only free chapters are properly translated. Rest is mtl.

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