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Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv54yr
2020-12-04 18:23

it's such a bummer when .you know that the novel is about a gamer in a game that has no real effect in his life and doesn't really Carry any significance. even if the mc gets something like a cheat, that's what it is. it's a cheat. it's called a cheat because it's unfair and it breaks the game's balance. and a chat group between game bosses is kind of stupid If there is no advanced AI as bosses since that would mean that the bosses are real humans controlling the avatars. and that would mean that there is no real reason for them to have a chatroom to talk in. and when the mc joins they would immediately notice him and throw him out

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daoistosrio546
daoistosrio546Lv6

So is the novel bad? without logics? a pointless plot?

Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv5

yes

daoistosrio546:So is the novel bad? without logics? a pointless plot?
Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv5

but my logic is sound

daoistosrio546:So is the novel bad? without logics? a pointless plot?
Xoul
XoulLv5

What are you saying man... is it a above average novel or trash I can go either way with your review....

Mumbajumba
MumbajumbaLv5

my personal opinion is that this novel is shit. but i can't just give one star to everything

Xoul:What are you saying man... is it a above average novel or trash I can go either way with your review....
Hokonoso
HokonosoLv13

I feel your pain, a story with no significance has no bearing on this site at all. but all those josei novels are here so yea, can't say anything.

Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

I share your personal opinion, just two or 5 chapters seeing how it works already gave me cancer just reading that. Actually, if you have no progress or sentimentality, it is useless. If you could communicate with the characters, talk to them and feel sorry or something like that with dialogues, more or less it would be understood, but the protagonist and, the whole novel, makes you look incredible -It's not- talking about what the bosses tell you about. They shoot when you kill them, as if that will give them something ... I think that neither satisfaction will give them any good. In fact, you should feel sorry for them, as they don't really have free will ... they are forced to die over and over again.

Mumbajumba:my personal opinion is that this novel is shit. but i can't just give one star to everything
Darwin111111
Darwin111111Lv4

Lol, when I say dialogue, it is something direct. I don't know ... that NPCs want to be different, improve and things like that. This just doesn't seem to have a goal

Darwin111111:I share your personal opinion, just two or 5 chapters seeing how it works already gave me cancer just reading that. Actually, if you have no progress or sentimentality, it is useless. If you could communicate with the characters, talk to them and feel sorry or something like that with dialogues, more or less it would be understood, but the protagonist and, the whole novel, makes you look incredible -It's not- talking about what the bosses tell you about. They shoot when you kill them, as if that will give them something ... I think that neither satisfaction will give them any good. In fact, you should feel sorry for them, as they don't really have free will ... they are forced to die over and over again.
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