Being as honest as possible, the gory scenes are well written but I hope that you would put more description into your story like what are the creepers and so on. Otherwise, it just makes it like reading in the mist with no direction. Also, you should focus on your stability in updates. You can't really expect many people to still remain interested after only posting once a week or less.
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Thank you for the excellent feedback! To be honest when I started this book it was meant to be a fanfiction so I assumed most people reading it would be a fan of The Walking Dead and already have that understanding. Now being apart of Webnovel I could totally understand where you are coming now that it is reaching more people. I never really thought of it like that, I’ll have to go back to do some revision. As for my updates, that is the best I can do with my busy work schedule therefore I just appreciate those who do show interest and stick around but understand that some may not keep up. Thanks so much for taking the time!
