Review Detail of amaturewriter in In the World of Naruto with a trading system

not a review ....thoughts/ and warning.. reading C12 the way its written, its so easy to see how MC could've prevented the uchiha massacre. look, u want to follow cannon cause u cant exactly make up new shit, is fine, but the way u've written, and fact that u acknowledge the solution itself and show that the MC has the capabilities to prevent it makes it look retarded. its all pointless drama. what I mean? -MC himself acknowledges shisuis sharigan and how it can control people and can use it to prevent the massacre [ C 12 ]. why not warn itachi? MC has an all mighty system, I mean this thing is so powerful it can literally sense hidden anbu and send a pic of them to MC's brain, and it was a passive ability, like a warning, thats how fking powerful it is, [ literally does it in c12- unless changed ]. if its that powerful, why not by a lying skill, tell he has a ability to see future or something and use that to warn itachi a couple months before the massacre and use the Kotoamatsuki on the village heads [danzo] a few weaks earlier or something? The system is so powerful. instead MC acts like a bitch, does nothing and then screams vengeance on the village heads......... ------------------------ but, fine, u did first part for story,....why isnt MC itachi lvl genius? dude could've easily graduated early and become anbu and become stronger with system. cause this shit is hax. cause of what it did. its intentionally neutered along with the MC ur story is interesting but its ruined [ for me ] cause of how easily MC could've changed cannon. and the fact that something so allmighty is purposefully neutered and yet still has hax abilities. The 2 reasons mentioned above just remove any interest I have. U could've just inserted MC after the uchiha massacre instead of this cause so far the way its written , MC had all the time and ability to save uchiha but didnt Also why is MC still using the Chinese name ye chen instead of his given name Tatsu? why not use one fking name? **: is this urs? it seems like a Chinese FF. cause of the chinse name, system and the general way its written. just asking