Review Detail of AxlSLL in RREN: Alternate 2020

Your novel has good things author. The style is fast-paced and straightforward, something really good in action scenes. It feels like a modern work, both in setting and as a literary work. Good job. However, sometimes it reads more like a journal, while others more like a short story. This inconsistency can make it sometimes a little tiresome and tedious to read. Try to stick more to one style. There are also some grammar mistakes like mixing grammatical tenses and missing plurals, but nothing that makes the story unreadable. Some few fixes and you're good to go. Keep working on it!