Review Detail of Melik_David in Book One: Overcoming The Power Within

Item: Book One: Overcoming The Power Within
Rating: 3.6

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Melik_DavidLv13yrMelik_David

The story seems like this has a lot of potential. Maybe the story could dive deep into the lore of the world and how each character got to where they are now.

Book One: Overcoming The Power Within

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JdCreatesAuthorJdCreates

Thank you for the feedback, I plan for the books to get deeper as it progress and the character's plot development to become more clear. If you haven't already and you are interested, consider adding it to your collection and share it with others if you like. I appreciate the review!

3yr