Review Detail of AlexisRan in Aerdrin: The Lost Heir of The Sky

Um, I'm sorry if I'm being a little bit too apprehensive. But your review rate is uhm... very low? It's not that I'm being salty ahahah. But, err... If the bad one is only the "story development" (since you seemed to dislike romance so much) then the rating damage wouldn't be that severe. So I just wanted to know if there's anything I can do to improve my writing even further? Something that you feel so bad to deserves such a rate? :) P.S. things will get focused starting chapter 82 I think, so maybe (if you wanna stay) you should just jump right there :l