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Review Detail of Titivillus in From Slave to Ruler

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Titivillus
TitivillusLv133yrTitivillus

Well, First of all, the autor can write well, as in there is little mistakes about grammar, but, overall story quality i got to half the story at the moment (chapter 40) and the MC barelly has 'screen' time the autor is focusing on too many characters at superficial level, sometimes you can Go 3-5 chapters without seringa the MC, i think this is a grave mistake to make at the beggining of a story because as readers we end up not carinho about any character at all. Also the autor Focus too much on R.A.P.E in too many chapters for too longe even when there is no reason to touch the subject at the time, too much trying to pass the impression of women and Men are equal etc, but at the same time this world seems medieval and with elemental abilities, a lot of incosistencies considering some women roles (economically) stablished at the start... It's not clear if people have super human strenghts or only elemental Powers when they have something abnormal in their favors... anyway, so far the autor sidetracks so much that by chapter 36 the MC appear in 11 chapters and he isn't the main Focus in half of them... I'm stoping this novel

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From Slave to Ruler

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InHisName
InHisNameLv6InHisName

Thanks for helpful review! It's appreciated.

skidzee
skidzeeLv3skidzee

is this harem?

Titivillus
TitivillusLv13Titivillus

Dunno, the MC barelly did anything at all, and talked with less than 3 people so far, i think... Can't say

skidzee:is this harem?
CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

This is a case of biting off more than you can chew