Review Detail of Slyyle in I'm a Stingray?
Review detail
Boredom personified. I read this on my alt just to get a good grasp on the story. So far (15 Chapters) it's literally just a fucking sting ray that can't evolve. That's it, that is the only thing unique about it's entire plot. He does get passive upgrades and stuff like that but he's still just a fucking sting ray. Writing Quality- 3 Simply mediocre; no beautiful sentence structure or truly grasping words. Nothing of that sorts Updates- Frequent Story Development-0, None; it's just a stingray that's underwater. All it does is be a stingray and acquire upgrades. Character Design- 0, Literally none There's literally no development, no prior information nothing that can let us formulate even a fucking fandom wiki page for MC. World Background- It's literally just fucking underwater.
I'm a Stingray?
MisterE05
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Okay and wouldn't it sound weird if the mc evolved into anything else if the title is *I'm a Stingray?* As for the other aspects of your review, they're well taken in and changes will be implemented over the courses of editing. đ
Slyyle:It's called "I'm a stingray?"
In stories like this you come for the title. You try to see if the mc grows into something greater. But in this story it has none of that, that's the main issue. This could be great if you put a spin on the story in a way that MC has been underwater for so long he now wants to experience the land or smt as such and thus attempts to go on shore. The main reason you lose readers is because there is no growth other than those tiny mutations. It's like stagnated growth
MisterE05:Okay and wouldn't it sound weird if the mc evolved into anything else if the title is *I'm a Stingray?* As for the other aspects of your review, they're well taken in and changes will be implemented over the courses of editing. đ
Slyyle:In stories like this you come for the title. You try to see if the mc grows into something greater. But in this story it has none of that, that's the main issue. This could be great if you put a spin on the story in a way that MC has been underwater for so long he now wants to experience the land or smt as such and thus attempts to go on shore. The main reason you lose readers is because there is no growth other than those tiny mutations. It's like stagnated growth
Lslsls:Well whats wrong with being a stingray? What, you got stung by a stingray while swimming in the sea and now they're your worst enemies?
Lslsls:Well whats wrong with being a stingray? What, you got stung by a stingray while swimming in the sea and now they're your worst enemies?