Review Detail of ShadowNovaS in The Impossible Fate That Leads To A God Of A New World

After reading 20 chapters of your story~ First chapters are big headache. Your style is something hard for me. I don't talk about grammar or something... Later - story is really better to read. But still something tickles me. But hey! Idea is very good and I wish you the best! This is something fresh for sure. Just without first chapters.