Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor immitation of a magic school anime.
LuciferVermillion
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LIKEIf you liked it thats fine. I gave an honest review based on my opinion. Obviously if i thought so poorly of it I didn't read the whole thing. I don't have a problem with using my imagination to flesh out an authors words but when half of the fight scenes consist of BAAM BOOM POW thats just lazy writing in my opinion.
It's impossible to give out a one star rating if its an honest review. To be honest, I've never given anyone a one star rating no matter how bad I felt it was. The catching point of my story is a story of different strings connecting to one single point. Fights in my story is not the catching points. The sound effects like 'BAM, WHAM, PAK' or something is meant for those who aren't good in their imaginations. I can't tolerate this when you say I'm lazy to write. If I'm lazy to write then there's no need for me to write so much in detail, in fact, there's no need for me to write either. I've spent so much time just to imagine a clear scene that I could convert it to words during my work, during my breakfast, lunch, dinner and even in my goddamn sleep. If you have anything you need to say, don't just "Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor imitation of a magic school anime". If you don't say out what's the freaking problem, how am I supposed to improve? I really don't understand what you mean by you don't get the full picture. Is it really so hard for you to say what's going on? Can't we just work this out so that I could improve it?
Kenneth_Herrig:If you liked it thats fine. I gave an honest review based on my opinion. Obviously if i thought so poorly of it I didn't read the whole thing. I don't have a problem with using my imagination to flesh out an authors words but when half of the fight scenes consist of BAAM BOOM POW thats just lazy writing in my opinion.
I delete reviews like this, its just a negative person who doesn't understand how difficult it is to write. If you inspect his profile you'll get an idea of what type of reader he is. I think the story is good, and others should give it a shot.
LuciferVermillion:It's impossible to give out a one star rating if its an honest review. To be honest, I've never given anyone a one star rating no matter how bad I felt it was. The catching point of my story is a story of different strings connecting to one single point. Fights in my story is not the catching points. The sound effects like 'BAM, WHAM, PAK' or something is meant for those who aren't good in their imaginations. I can't tolerate this when you say I'm lazy to write. If I'm lazy to write then there's no need for me to write so much in detail, in fact, there's no need for me to write either. I've spent so much time just to imagine a clear scene that I could convert it to words during my work, during my breakfast, lunch, dinner and even in my goddamn sleep. If you have anything you need to say, don't just "Its like the author just writes down half the story without any concern for how the readers are supposed to get the full picture. A poor imitation of a magic school anime". If you don't say out what's the freaking problem, how am I supposed to improve? I really don't understand what you mean by you don't get the full picture. Is it really so hard for you to say what's going on? Can't we just work this out so that I could improve it?