Review Detail of NaoKat in P.A.R.A.D.O.X. PROJECT: Aeon Genesis

After reading and consulting with others, I'm going to be honest with my own writings (since none bothers to give one). Ignore the other reviews, they are only from review swappings. Lots of inconsistency. Too many useless descriptions for the characters and the surroundings that impact nothing at all mixed with the essential ones. This causes vital information to be missed since the readers would just skip parts that seemed useless. A very unstable update. Found some (embarrassing) plot holes and grammar mistakes (mainly pronouns, causing confusion for the readers). The world building and background were too strict, numbing and paralyzing the chance of story progression and dynamic flows. Anti-climatic results from the scenes and pointless scenarios(which is disappointing. Ouch) The characters are either too useless or too cliche, especially for the protagonists. Lots of reused (bad) tropes from other fictions. Some are too smart and too stupid at the same time. The genre says fantasy, but where? I see no epic fantasy battles, only quick and boring catfights yielding no important result for the story. Is this story for you? As long as you can bear (and anticipate) the negativenesses and enjoy reading western fantasy, perhaps this story could be for you.