Review Detail of WesternGod in Enrolled In A Magical Academy

Everything about this story is intriguing and suspenseful. I like the character development and the side characters arent overly shallow. Overall, this would be a good story if you just fixed one major issue. Sentence structure and proper grammar! I can't fault the author too harshly, since I can obviously tell they don't speak english as a first language. Just read more english stories (proper ones, not web novels) to get a better feel for sentence structure and flow. Then read your own work to revise. You should be able to hear the difference. . This is meant as constructive criticism. Thank you for the work you put in.