I liked movies like "Back to the future", "Minority Raport", "Butterfly effect", "Equilibrum", "Inception", etc... I like the idea of time travel. Actually it is difficult subject and not easy to create something new. Your concept is inetersting! Dialogues are engaging, characters are expressive, descriptions also fine. All the best with your story!
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