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Lorus03
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A classic but interesting novel. I haven't read much so I can't tell for sure but, there are two problems I'd like to criticize. First, it is a really serious problem. Author has a problem conveying information. There is almost no basic information and MC is knowing people or things he's never been in contact with. For example, we know amlost nothing about the game at all. We only get to know that mc's profession is a tanky melee type. We don't know any other information about the professions at all. And maybe because he think it may become annoying, author didn't show mc's status at the beginning. We don't know what status the game use, original status, or how much increase per lvl. Nothing. Nad when authir feels like it, he suddenly show the status and says mc's status is really incredible. We don't know how to compare at all. Although mc's status is not shown, almost every piece of equipment has their status explained. And mc started saying things like "Wow. This lvl5 blue equipment has tge status of a lvl10 equipment which noone has ever seen before." and "Wow, these monsters, even pro gamers may not be able to fight as well as me" when he's clearly not in the industry. In short, author hides all info and only says "Hey, my mc is really awesome." The second thing should be the balance. While I know that this novel is all about mc's picking up op equipment, he got a third lvl out of the five lvls of equipment currently known at lvl5 and that's not even a one time thing. He's destroying the game balance from the very start. Unless it is a solo mcvs guilds, there can be almost suspense at all with this kind if balance. Dispite the criticism, this is still a pretty interesting book. So, I still recommend trying out.

LightningCatThief
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This novel is a typical example of unbalanced game play. Which makes it dreadfully boring, because after 10 chapters it is already clear, that the only way for the MC to face any setback at all is for him to make stupid mistakes. After reading 30+ chapters, I can only stop because it is stupidly boring. Comparing it to doomsday online is doing a disservice to doomsday online, because in this novel the MC becomes a God compared to everyone else in less than 10 chapters. And there are no side characters, side quests, interesting story twists or literally anything good about this novel to balance that flaw. You want proof? Author needs to use a timeskip of 7 days (compared to the 1 actually described) in the first few chapter. Literally 80% of the time is skipped before chapter 40(I didn't read more). The power progression, time line, cost-benefit ratio, level progression, admin behavior etc. makes absolutely no sense in this novel. Example: MC reaches level 10 in 1/2 day. Others need 5-7 days to reach level 10. Mc needs those 5-7 days to reach level 15, but many others who needed at least 5 days to reach 10 are already at level 12 on day 7. Mc has a monopoly on field bosses, areas, quests and literally anything else for at least 4 days, while possessing at least 2 times the stats of any other player and 3 times more and better skills(at least 6 purple skills) in addition to gaining perfekt loot every hour. But MC leveling in those skipped days, in which he did not leave his room and only played that one game, is worse than any other random noop from a guild. The MC is portrait as a random every day guy, but his first day he is literally the God of speed runs, who makes no mistakes, uses his environment for his advantage and hoards overpowering skills like no other. Then he is a noop during timeskip and returns to being a perfect arrogant gaming God right after. Of course, not because he is actually competent, no, the rest of the characters are just incompetent and brain dead. Giving a single coin, fast pass or wathever to this novel is simply a waste. Don't read this shit, it's an abomination.

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