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Review Detail of Standoda in The White Titan (ONE PIECE TO FAIRY TAIL WORLD)

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Quite good at first except for a few things who comes and crash the party a bit namely: 1: the MC have a sad backstory and all but at times it still become a bit cringe, i know FT all wear their emotions on their sleeves but quality still suffers a bit. Still better than abused and neglect stories though 2: idk if the MC plans to ever grow up but if he don't implies himself a bit more in his guild, story is just gonna become: Enzo watches canon fairy tail story and look badass on background while everyone gets some 3: The power of MC don't looks like they evolved at all except they freeze magic itself. A bit of a letdown for a supposed master of haki, devil fruit and rokushiki. Just suggestions but MC could evolve from just zoan fruit and become a full fledged take over-mage of the mythical beast variant with different elements depending on the beast : ice Yeti, fire Phoenix, wind chupacabra (picture nargacuga from Monster Hunter), thunder raijin( again zinogre from MH), water Megalodon with hybrid form looking like sage kisame... There is like dozens of possible evolution ways for MC but i have a hunch he's just gonna turn everyone in ice sculptures maybe a fruit awakening and that's all. Kinda sad when you think of the potential basic idea had oh and MC needs some hormones to get a pairing not stay stiff like cardboard and have feelings growing out of his arse when autor remember he needs them cuz having a sociopat flirting tempt to flirt mira or erza is a bit of a turnoff hope it didn't turn into a rant and autor try to take some bits out of it, it's absolutely not flame just trying to be as constructive as possible

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The White Titan (ONE PIECE TO FAIRY TAIL WORLD)

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