Review Detail of Ashmodai in Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
Review detail
Not a very enjoyable Story. Grammar is good. 4/5 Story Development 2/5 it's at the moment just Canon with an added MC. Character Development 2/5 The MC is basically an Emo that mentally complains about everything be it all Mighty or exercises or talking with other people. There is no real development at the moment but its not enjoyable to read with such an MC. Update Stability 4/5 World background 3/5 since it's only canon there is nothing much to rate. So all in all an okay work but nothing special and the MCs personality makes it rather difficult to enjoy.
Mha: Aegis the Shield Hero
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You've been a little too bad with a 2/5 for the story, it's being handled pretty well, plus as fan fiction it should stay similar to the original story (at least initially). SPOILER ON "REBORN AS THE GRANDSON OF MADARA" A NARUTO FAN FICTION, READ ONLY IF YOU ARE NOT INTERESTED OR HAVE ALREADY READ however it has nothing to do with (I'm not offending anyone, it's personal tastes) "reborn as the grandson of madara uchiha", there the story is already disintegrated from a rather early point, because MC was born several years before Itachi ( I don't know if you know Naruto or fan fiction but it was to make a comparison) and becomes, at the birth of naruto, a war machine capable of beating almost all the ninja world alone, solves every type of problem that the characters have and everything becomes a "one man show" because he makes all the other characters flat (about 13/14 years old) and then hallucinating enemies start to appear to create a challenge.
Your argument is pointless since fanfic authors either argue "it's a fanfic so I can go as crazy as I want" or like you just now. I have personal rating criteria that includes both cases. The 2 point story rating is either AU with slight basis in Canon or Mainly Canon with slight changes to the story which this story is. I rate all stories according to these criteria as long they are not unreadable which then defaults in 1 point rating.
Reviews are reviews for a reason, people have differing opinions; I don't see you posting on the 5star spam reviews about it not deserving them or multiple 5stars by the same person being bad for the story, double standards at it's finest.
michilegends_87:You've been a little too bad with a 2/5 for the story, it's being handled pretty well, plus as fan fiction it should stay similar to the original story (at least initially). SPOILER ON "REBORN AS THE GRANDSON OF MADARA" A NARUTO FAN FICTION, READ ONLY IF YOU ARE NOT INTERESTED OR HAVE ALREADY READ however it has nothing to do with (I'm not offending anyone, it's personal tastes) "reborn as the grandson of madara uchiha", there the story is already disintegrated from a rather early point, because MC was born several years before Itachi ( I don't know if you know Naruto or fan fiction but it was to make a comparison) and becomes, at the birth of naruto, a war machine capable of beating almost all the ninja world alone, solves every type of problem that the characters have and everything becomes a "one man show" because he makes all the other characters flat (about 13/14 years old) and then hallucinating enemies start to appear to create a challenge.