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Resurgent
ResurgentLv133yrResurgent

The plot has good potential since I felt the premise was really interesting and intriguing. I would especially like to see how the two main characters develop their relationship since even their childhood relationship would make readers go "a***" 😊. Coming to the writing part, the author can really improve it by fixing some grammar hiccups and tenses. Also the point of view can be modified in such a way that the readers flow won't be interrupted; I would suggest to write it in such a way that it would allow a smooth transition. And I would also suggest adding a bit more detail to the world building, so readers can just get a basic idea. Other than that, this novel is awesome and a great read 👌I hope the author keeps up her good work with consistent updates 😁

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Phantom of a Devil (BL)

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sharrnister
sharrnisterAuthorsharrnister

Thank you so much for the suggestions, and the grammars I'll look more into it as I'm willing to improve and learn from my mistakes. Appreciate it! thank you for the review 😊

Resurgent
ResurgentLv13Resurgent

You are welcome :) But I wonder why that onomatopoeia in my review was censored 😅

sharrnister:Thank you so much for the suggestions, and the grammars I'll look more into it as I'm willing to improve and learn from my mistakes. Appreciate it! thank you for the review 😊
sharrnister
sharrnisterAuthorsharrnister

right, I was confused too 😅

Resurgent:You are welcome :) But I wonder why that onomatopoeia in my review was censored 😅
Resurgent
ResurgentLv13Resurgent

Haha hope you didn't misunderstand😂

sharrnister:right, I was confused too 😅
sharrnister
sharrnisterAuthorsharrnister

hahaha don't worry I didn't 😂

Resurgent:Haha hope you didn't misunderstand😂