Review Detail of The_Sheep in Death in Remnant

This is just my opinion, I do not tell the author to do this, as the story follows it is entirely up to him: I liked the concept of the fan-fic, the horsemen of the apocalypse in the multiverse, but honestly? putting Harem was a bad idea, it would be much more interesting to focus on a story of action and evolution, for example, it would be interesting to mix a little of the 2 worlds, for example, demonic invasions in the world of Remnant, and he and the knights would have to defeat both Grimm and demons, and honestly, I’m not much against harem, but in this fan-fic, I didn’t like it, in this fan-fic I think it would be much better to focus on character development in terms of the knight and the multiverses, I could without a problem having one or two love interests, after all he is a child and grew up, it is normal to have love interests, but a harem of this size ... I can't quite describe it, I just didn't like the harem in this RWBY and Darksiders fan-fic.