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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv133yrI_am_inevitable

Really good fanfiction but can you stop focusing on the other horsemen so much.

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Death in Remnant

Splendora_Gaming

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I_am_inevitable
I_am_inevitableLv13I_am_inevitable

Though the body double idea was a bad one.

Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

Well, they'll be remaining in remnant to watch over it when death goes off to other worlds so their role will be much diminished at that point. That's a few chapters off at the time I am writing this.

Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

I am not sure why body doubles would be bad. They are effectively still him, everything they hear, smell, see, touch or taste the original experiences as well. It just lets him be in multiple places at the same time like the six paths of pain, only rather then animated corpses they are fully alive clones/perfect copies.

I_am_inevitable:Though the body double idea was a bad one.
Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14Jackson_Alucard611

is death the mc or are there multiple povs

Splendora_Gaming:I am not sure why body doubles would be bad. They are effectively still him, everything they hear, smell, see, touch or taste the original experiences as well. It just lets him be in multiple places at the same time like the six paths of pain, only rather then animated corpses they are fully alive clones/perfect copies.
Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

Both. During the first arc in Remnant, there are some POV changes to the other horsemen, but in other Star Wars and beyond the main focus is on Death.. There may be occasionally chapters dedicated to his wife and children, but most chapters will be focused on Death's current adventure.

Jackson_Alucard611:is death the mc or are there multiple povs
Jackson_Alucard611
Jackson_Alucard611Lv14Jackson_Alucard611

he has children now? or in the future

Splendora_Gaming:Both. During the first arc in Remnant, there are some POV changes to the other horsemen, but in other Star Wars and beyond the main focus is on Death.. There may be occasionally chapters dedicated to his wife and children, but most chapters will be focused on Death's current adventure.
Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

Yes, he has children due to a significant time skip following the RWBY Arc. I plan to eventually do a re-write to lengthen the arcs, since I'm pretty new at writing yet. I have some ideas for when I get to that point, but for bow I am just pressing forward. I wont say spoilers beyond the fact that he has children, and when I do the re-write in the future there will be a lot of changes, though I'll still leave up this version at that point.

Jackson_Alucard611:he has children now? or in the future
AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv12AntiWorldSystem

it's a bad idea, and you use they, so its like a clone, the difference is you can feel all their 5 sense, so its not him......it's just like cucking yourself......

Splendora_Gaming:I am not sure why body doubles would be bad. They are effectively still him, everything they hear, smell, see, touch or taste the original experiences as well. It just lets him be in multiple places at the same time like the six paths of pain, only rather then animated corpses they are fully alive clones/perfect copies.
AntiWorldSystem
AntiWorldSystemLv12AntiWorldSystem

and they also have their own mind

AntiWorldSystem:it's a bad idea, and you use they, so its like a clone, the difference is you can feel all their 5 sense, so its not him......it's just like cucking yourself......
Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

The body doubles o not have their own minds at all, it is merely that Death trained himself over time to compartmentalize his own mind to better control all of his body doubles simultaneously. To avoid spoilers as much as possible, I point to death's adopted daughter who he managed to teach the body double technique too. Though she can create many body doubles, she lacks Death's ability to compartmentalize his mind, so she can only control one at a time and that becomes her true body. Even if he does something through his clones and numbs the sense receptors in his true body to be able to have all of his body doubles continue acting without being influenced by each other, he still sees, smells, hears,, feels, and tastes absolutely everything his body doubles are feeling as it happens. I don't see that as cucking himself at all, since the body doubles have no minds of their own and it is only due to Death's mental training that he reached the point where he could compartmentalize to this extent. In the beginning, when he first started using the technique, he suffered from major sensory overload, which forced him to compartmentalize better. Adopted daughter hasn't managed to learn compartmentalize at all yet, hence only controlling one at a time.

AntiWorldSystem:and they also have their own mind
Hazerithious
HazerithiousLv5Hazerithious

So it's basically a hivemind-puppet type technique, but with only one 'mind'?

Splendora_Gaming:The body doubles o not have their own minds at all, it is merely that Death trained himself over time to compartmentalize his own mind to better control all of his body doubles simultaneously. To avoid spoilers as much as possible, I point to death's adopted daughter who he managed to teach the body double technique too. Though she can create many body doubles, she lacks Death's ability to compartmentalize his mind, so she can only control one at a time and that becomes her true body. Even if he does something through his clones and numbs the sense receptors in his true body to be able to have all of his body doubles continue acting without being influenced by each other, he still sees, smells, hears,, feels, and tastes absolutely everything his body doubles are feeling as it happens. I don't see that as cucking himself at all, since the body doubles have no minds of their own and it is only due to Death's mental training that he reached the point where he could compartmentalize to this extent. In the beginning, when he first started using the technique, he suffered from major sensory overload, which forced him to compartmentalize better. Adopted daughter hasn't managed to learn compartmentalize at all yet, hence only controlling one at a time.
Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingAuthorSplendora_Gaming

I posted a re-write and I chose to call them avatar's in the re-write. The skill is still called body double because of where if originates from, that is what it is called, though for the way it works Avatar seemed a better term to use. Additionally, Avatar's are often associated with gods, and the mc has a small spark of divinity from his semblance, so that word works better for that reason as well A hive mind with only one mind works as well, though.

Hazerithious:So it's basically a hivemind-puppet type technique, but with only one 'mind'?