Early review so changes may occur quickly. Although the tag has op mc it would be appreciated if it is done well, an mc who just blows through everything will become boring fast but one who struggles and then becomes op is much better and not just in an instant. So far the concept of the story is well done but character portrayal needs work. Just accepting ghat nephilim exist in this world is not normal mind set, but interaction and progress are well done and overall there hasn't been any rushing which is appreciated since slow pace stories tend to be more interesting and allow more time for character development. So far this story gets 4☆ on concept alone.
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