Review Detail of Kokushibou in King of PES

Unreadable, it's honestly just a mess. The idea is interesting, but the execution is terrible. Everything from grammar to the lack of punctuation mark's to wording to sentence building, is just straight up terrible. I have problem's understanding if the mc has knowgledge of the world he is in because the grammar is so bad! Just read the chapter called "Issei" and you see what i mean, it just doesn't make any sense what-so-ever. I could rant more, but it would take day's if i start to nit-pick. But one thing which scream's bad fanfic, are these chapter's with "15k word's". They just scream trash! Anyway, why i don't give one star is because the idea is interesting and im in a good mood. Writing Quality: Straight up trash, it's like a 5th grader wrote this. Native language or not, this is bad. Like really bad, not MTL level (i think) but still terrible. [1 Star.] Updating Stability: I don't know if it's going to be consistent, but im giving the Author the benefit of the doubt. [4 Star's] Story Development: Development? There is none so far! It's just time-skip and another time-skip and another time-skip. It's rushed af, he is already rich. Is basically already Op without any training, typical manga writing which just got glossed-over. Has already a secret organisation, every girl in school love's him, and all that repetitiv boring bs.[1 Star.] Character Design: It's Highschool DxD, the only oc is the mc. But beside's "very cute boy" we don't know anything. Ah, i think his hair colour was white? I don't really remember. [1 Star.] World Backround: It's Highschool DxD, so yeah..nothing is added, it's simply DxD. [2 Star's] [P/S": I read this this in like 20 minute's, so if you want to see how good this is. Then good luck! I wish the Author good luck, like i said, the idea was interesting. But the execution was horrendous.]