Review Detail of Matilda_Rosenberg in A SUPER RICH GUY

The story-line is not bad, but Author you need to improve your writing quality. Description was not very good and lacks liveliness. story development isn't bad, but I'm mostly disappointed in the Character design. Specially FL's character is ridiculous, contradictory and too artificial . I didn't get any proper character. Only ML's character design is PASSABLE. Background is vague and unclear. If you ever edit, please consider these points. The writing quality failed to show characters emotion, just FL's annoying all the time 'Hik hik' crying is too boring and disgusting.