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2020-10-17 08:54

Hey, the story seems interesting, even though it is two chapters. However, your grammar, punctuation and spellings need a lot of work. If you are able to transform the quality of your writing, your story would turn out even better. Otherwise keep up the good work.

The Last sight

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Krizzy_By
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It was a interserting story like wow i really like it even it's have a 2 chapters. Im waiting for the next update. Keep it up writing. Cheers!!!

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Thanks for reading my book if you have read it, any feedbacks Discord- Aloushyawiky#4748 have a wonderful day, stay safe and enjoy your life👍🏻👍🏻

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YAAAS. Congrats on 1k dude. Everything is great. KEEP UP DAH GOOD WORK!! Great everything. Thanks for everybody who's read this book He's a very good friend of mine ^^

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ALI_2750
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Reveal spoiler

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LazySatanixDevil
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Great Start of this novel but you should check the spellings correctly. but overall It's a good start and a good plot and also have a good potential

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