Review Detail of antmanFN in Looter System In Anime Multiverse

This story has a lot of potential and could be really good but idk if its because the author is lazy but he doesn't respond to any comments or criticism and doesn't even try to fix his mistakes or says it's a multiverse novel but so far he is only in naruto so idk why it says multiverse and on chapter 8 it say sakumo died but by chapter 26 he is alive so I do recommend if you can push through the mistakes and the author stops being a bad author and fix his mistakes.