Review Detail of dukroger in Looter System In Anime Multiverse

Good story, but it lacks coherence and logic, the schedule is wrong in some things, not to mention that in an hour it presents a character as dead, that's how he spoke about the father of kakashi, and I set chapters later, it shows this character alive, I know that the author is more concerned with the quality of writing and fluency of development, but a friend of the author, he cannot sacrifice logic and coherence for this reason, otherwise he will spoil the story in part, and that is why my note is just that, but in general it is worth reading.