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The story is good for first 25 Chapter but went Chapter 26, all hell break loose, Sakumo somehow alive went chapter 8 said he clearly dead already. Even in Canon said he dead went Kakashi 5 years old. if author not given explaination or rewrite the story.. I fear that this story turn bad, with many confusing matter being made.
Looter System In Anime Multiverse
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it's not plot hole you dumb... it's a inaccurate timeline. first sakumo still alive, I can accept if author make a.u said sakumo alive but in whole chapter 8 clearly said Kakashi lost his parent. second, the war in the story, not Shinobi World war 3 but World war 3. Konoha not fight with Suna in World War 3, they focus more on Iwa and Kumo. third, Tsuna was supposed not joining the world war 3 as she at that time not able to became a doctor as she was trauma of the blood because of lost of her love one. I'm okay if the author made the story A.U but give a damn explaination and also don't suddenly add your supposed dead character was alive. Next what? Hashirama suddenly alive well and join the war? Like I said on my review. if author not give explaination or rewrite it, I'm afraid this story will turned bad.
Blackleperd:One plothole vs the perfection the rest of the novel is. He needs to go fast to give us lots of chapters, it's fine to have a hole or two!
Saitama_Blast:it's not plot hole you dumb... it's a inaccurate timeline. first sakumo still alive, I can accept if author make a.u said sakumo alive but in whole chapter 8 clearly said Kakashi lost his parent. second, the war in the story, not Shinobi World war 3 but World war 3. Konoha not fight with Suna in World War 3, they focus more on Iwa and Kumo. third, Tsuna was supposed not joining the world war 3 as she at that time not able to became a doctor as she was trauma of the blood because of lost of her love one. I'm okay if the author made the story A.U but give a damn explaination and also don't suddenly add your supposed dead character was alive. Next what? Hashirama suddenly alive well and join the war? Like I said on my review. if author not give explaination or rewrite it, I'm afraid this story will turned bad.
How the hell is this bias review !? He clearly gave a valid point. The timeline is messed up and full of inconsistencies, the grammar is barely readable (like author forgot to edit and proof read before upload).
StrikingWave:Biased review.
eclairsshi:How the hell is this bias review !? He clearly gave a valid point. The timeline is messed up and full of inconsistencies, the grammar is barely readable (like author forgot to edit and proof read before upload).
dude, does all this really matter? like is there a reason to get upset about this? i mean i thoroughly enjoyed reading it so what does it matter if it has some mistakes? the mistaks are only really minor background details anyway so they dont really matter or take away from the story in any way. PLUS this IS a fanfic, if you dislike how things are not accurate to cannon then just think of it as A.U or creative authority and just enjoy the story, how doo you expect to enjoy anything if you spend all your time focusing on the accuracy of the fine details rather than just enjoying what you have.
Saitama_Blast:it's not plot hole you dumb... it's a inaccurate timeline. first sakumo still alive, I can accept if author make a.u said sakumo alive but in whole chapter 8 clearly said Kakashi lost his parent. second, the war in the story, not Shinobi World war 3 but World war 3. Konoha not fight with Suna in World War 3, they focus more on Iwa and Kumo. third, Tsuna was supposed not joining the world war 3 as she at that time not able to became a doctor as she was trauma of the blood because of lost of her love one. I'm okay if the author made the story A.U but give a damn explaination and also don't suddenly add your supposed dead character was alive. Next what? Hashirama suddenly alive well and join the war? Like I said on my review. if author not give explaination or rewrite it, I'm afraid this story will turned bad.
its more about the fact that the Author said that sakumo is dead and there are some after effects, but then later he isnt dead, it simply makes no sense and the author is contradicting himself here ... you cant just say there "its a fanfic" and be done with it
Bored_MC:dude, does all this really matter? like is there a reason to get upset about this? i mean i thoroughly enjoyed reading it so what does it matter if it has some mistakes? the mistaks are only really minor background details anyway so they dont really matter or take away from the story in any way. PLUS this IS a fanfic, if you dislike how things are not accurate to cannon then just think of it as A.U or creative authority and just enjoy the story, how doo you expect to enjoy anything if you spend all your time focusing on the accuracy of the fine details rather than just enjoying what you have.