Writing quality; even if you're a weak grammar savvy you can still skim over or at least understand any mistakes immediately. Story Development; I expected something more like a harem thing with the mc getting used to the world with only himself and the "mobs". I was more than pleasantly surprised when the main character had a fleshed out and stable past that didn't give information that wouldn't be relevant later, i.e. past world family or friends, last world peoples names, etc., while not just dropping some rando with no past in. Character Design; Again, was pleasantly surprised when the MC had a wonderful reason for being someone ok with being on his own and wasnt some gooey eyed shmuck who goes googly eyes at the first girl he see's. The side characters we know so far are pointed out by the author himself as somewhat cliche, referring to them as a airhead and a tsundere (I dont think tsundere was what he used and it doesn't even describe her but its the only thing I can think of.). And despite what one would assume, the author has added a surprising amount of depth to them already despite there only being a 5 chapters so far, and only 3 with them talking and doing things. I'm not saying we have an entire autobiography but we have a clear read on their relationship, who they are, and even what they think of the mc. Updating Stability; Idk theres 5 chapters and they came out in what I assume was an already written and prepped bunch. World Background; The author somehow added lore to minecraft... MINECRAFT! I didn't even know that was a thing you could do... beyond "Game Theory" on YouTube of course.
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LIKEThanks for the reveiw my guy! I try my best to create character’s that have personalitys then what other heram tags do. Plus, Its also the reason why I like soing OP-MC’s more then I do slow starts. Its hard to create characters if you have to focus a lot of it on the MC grinding it out and such. But anyway, Thanks for the review!
That's actually a very good point🤔 I would say it can show how devoted one is to effort and such but I doubt it would come across that way given how training sequences nowadays are just for "Hey look at me im strong!" moments after 30 chapters of being underestimated...
QuestionableReadin:Thanks for the reveiw my guy! I try my best to create character’s that have personalitys then what other heram tags do. Plus, Its also the reason why I like soing OP-MC’s more then I do slow starts. Its hard to create characters if you have to focus a lot of it on the MC grinding it out and such. But anyway, Thanks for the review!
QuestionableReadin:Thanks for the reveiw my guy! I try my best to create character’s that have personalitys then what other heram tags do. Plus, Its also the reason why I like soing OP-MC’s more then I do slow starts. Its hard to create characters if you have to focus a lot of it on the MC grinding it out and such. But anyway, Thanks for the review!