Review Detail of Jahrik in Chasing For Justice

This feels like Nancy Drew if she were a lawyer instead of a nosy kid. Well, it's not really that similar, but I loved those books (and the Hardy Boys) as a kid and this story fills me with an odd nostalgia. To the review! The good: The hook is good, it draws you in and gets you invested. You care about what happens to these characters, the world seems diverse from what we're allowed to see of it, and I like where it's going so far. The bad: Eh, English is a second language here is my guess. Poor word choice here and there, enough to be noticed, but not so bad as to make this excellent story unreadable. With an editor I could see this being a top seller. Overall: I really liked this story and I'll recommend it to any friend interested in crime/drama/mystery.