Review Detail of RDxElsie in The Secrets of Dragons

The lovely potato here! I would appreciate any and all feedback on my growing story. This happened to be just an idea from a dream that my sister had one night and we decided to turn it into a story. We really hope everyone enjoys reading it as much as we are enjoying writing it! Don't be shy and say hello when you stop by. Please point out any and all errors and I will do what I can to fix them in a timely manner!. Thank you for reading!