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2020-10-29 12:18

keep up the good story, it is quite original that his talent is specified in singing and finally a fanfic that includes waifus from genshin impact! I just hope that chapters are uploaded regularly

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I read up to chapter 10 and the plot is exactly as described by the type: "Na1gel" MC is a bit of a fool, since his wisdom is D, which is above average, I thought he could think more deeply about things and not be an emotionally unstable fool who makes decisions based only on sudden feelings. From what I remember of the guy who rejected him, he was supposed to have rejected him for not wanting to better himself, but with words as if she felt superior to him, but the guy was average in general, clearly average, but not all people are average in almost everything, many are smart and are pathetically bad athletes, or others strong but not so smart, the problem is that he says it as if he was superior, as if he was so good and always self overcome with goals, but he feels guilt for what happened directly as if he had repressed everything he felt for him to say such hurtful words Then we have his family, who only accepted what they did when he was so badly hurt, showing that if he didn't die or have an experience like that, they never treat him differently, and that says a lot. Now let's move on to the part that totally disappointed me, forgiving that friend as a prisoner of his emotions and then telling him that he loves her, that was so pathetic, not only what happened, but how it was all just forgotten like it never happened and like it never hurt him. Nobody asked for a revenge so that they would burn in hell, it was only expected that it would be more logical and he would move away from his family and cut his ties with Megan, without forgetting that the MC forgave Megan but not his family, what is the point in that? It was Megan who did harmful things to him knowing what he was doing, being ignored by your family, it's bad what happens, but they didn't intentionally say hurtful things to him. We can end up with the story having quite a few clichés that make the reading less pleasant in my opinion. I really liked the context of the story, but the MC and how the author develops the story is so unappealing, so unattractive and so stupid, it makes everything go wrong.

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