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Wishfullfilment, and not even a God one. There is OP and there is God playing Godzilla in his Sandbox-Kingdom. This is the later. Even World background is more than stupid, which is actually quite hard to do for a fanfiction, because the whole world is already there, ready to be used. I mean what kind of logic is it to give every dead soul a universe in case the dead person is not as moronic as the MC of this story, a number of multiverses to ruin and destroy. Even if you are so far above all powerful that you don't need to care about trillions of supergods running amok and destroying you creations, why would you do it. There is no entertainment in repeating the same thing trillions of times. Year MC is literally a T-Rex in a chicken farm, but his choices are beyond moronic. Example: Choose limitless Magic, All-knowing and True Immortality, and you are better than MC while still having 4 wishes left. All knowing entity:"You thought things trough, I am impressed", my ass. A 5 year old could do better. Argggg, don't think about stupid, don't review stupid, just leave it.
Arslan in Game of Thrones
Makh
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3 Things: 1. Don't create ridiculous difficult prologues, if it is not relevant for the rest of your story, keep it simple and clean. Reusing ideas and concepts is allowed here. 2. Never, and I mean never ever use a godlike entity without setting rules and regulations for the interaction. Family, favors, karma, position etc. works well in most cases. In the worst case use on a wim as an excuse. And also never humanise such a entity, godlike entities do not think within human limits otherwise they would not be gods. Tipp: avoid any kind of judgement if the person is not special or relevant in some way to the entity. 3. Use Rules for powers, ties into one and two, because otherwise your world building is majorly flawed from the start. If you yourself can not create a template copy someone else's, it a fanfiction not a published novel. Example: Read GOT and choose 7 things you like most and give them to your MC.
Makh:I don't know what I can learn from this review but thanks anyway.