-MC has white hair in GOT....this is just stupid. he'd get killed or something -MC is more or less a god cause of his wishes. he has supertalent, complete immunity to almost everything and a lelouch eyes without limits. Too OP and boring [ unless changed ] -MC a kid is behaving more mature and ***** like in world where superstitions is the norm I dont want to say the idea is stupid cause its interesting but it has some stupid shit.
Makh
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LIKEremove white and some powers. its too much. the white hair is just stupid and MC talking as a kid is also the same. GL [suggestion only]
Makh:the advice is appreciated.
lol clam ur panties. also ....those in volantis dont come to kingsland and meet the king. and stop comparing merchants to a lords wife. for the amount of hatred and paranoia robert he would've assumed the MC mom got fked by the mad king or something. this is why its significant and I mentioned it. jon and his family met the old king, thats my point
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bro whats up with u? something is wrong with u. so aggressive. take a chill pill or something. jesus
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forget it, why are u even talking about a review concerning the bks PLOT? u have no knowledge about the bk and u talk about a the review? go read, and chill. so much anger
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nah bro, u just aggressive and weird .[also dont , not read a bk because of my review, thats stupid. take it as a warning. the review is just my thoughts. take it as a warning and read the bk, u might like it] I am ending this conversation so dont reply back. bye bye
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amaturewriter:lol clam ur panties. also ....those in volantis dont come to kingsland and meet the king. and stop comparing merchants to a lords wife. for the amount of hatred and paranoia robert he would've assumed the MC mom got fked by the mad king or something. this is why its significant and I mentioned it. jon and his family met the old king, thats my point
Pumpkin26:Go write your own fcking novel idiot just drop this novel if you don't like it
Pumpkin26:Go write your own fcking novel idiot just drop this novel if you don't like it
TheLonelyGod:Are you reviewing or are you complaining his powers and looks??? is there character development or a good world background? You've read it so I would like to know your Opinion on what the MC does that's making you mad!