Review Detail of amaturewriter in Arslan in Game of Thrones

the advice is appreciated.

remove white and some powers. its too much. the white hair is just stupid and MC talking as a kid is also the same. GL [suggestion only]

yah BUT THEY AINT IN KINGSLANDING...u watched GOT my friend? LOL, point seems like u dont

I suggest u go watch the series again so u understand why ur point is wrong

lol clam ur panties. also ....those in volantis dont come to kingsland and meet the king. and stop comparing merchants to a lords wife. for the amount of hatred and paranoia robert he would've assumed the MC mom got fked by the mad king or something. this is why its significant and I mentioned it. jon and his family met the old king, thats my point

bro whats up with u? something is wrong with u. so aggressive. take a chill pill or something. jesus

forget it, why are u even talking about a review concerning the bks PLOT? u have no knowledge about the bk and u talk about a the review? go read, and chill. so much anger

**: by bk i mean the FF

nah bro, u just aggressive and weird .[also dont , not read a bk because of my review, thats stupid. take it as a warning. the review is just my thoughts. take it as a warning and read the bk, u might like it] I am ending this conversation so dont reply back. bye bye

You have a strong point

Go write your own fcking novel idiot just drop this novel if you don't like it

Lol someone got clap

He did write a novel check it out it’s gud

Yes, YESMAN.

The MC Will have a girlfriend/wife or harém?

Are you reviewing or are you complaining his powers and looks??? is there character development or a good world background? You've read it so I would like to know your Opinion on what the MC does that's making you mad!

Actually Never mond! I just read it!🤣🤣