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Oracle17
Oracle17Lv34yr
2020-12-23 20:30

This is my first cultivation book notwithstanding the author has managed to get me hooked. Honestly, the description of the setting of the book is pretty commendable. That said, I think the author can still improve the book if he were to work on the flow of the story and make the readers feel more of the emotions of the characters so as not to make them seem flat. The author can also work a little more on the grammar. All in all, nice work Author, keep up the good work!❤🌹☺🤗

Beyond The Mystery

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_EvergreenAuthor

thanks. Am working on it.🙏🙏🙏👍👍👍❤❤

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_EvergreenAuthor

Pls let me know the chapters where you find the errors❤

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