Hmm, where should I start? Writing Quality: Is decent but your writing style has its own charm, grammars and punctuation are so-so, good job! Story development: well-paced I supposed. Updating stability: I recommend you to upload your chapters 3 times a week, I mean that is the average one here. World Background: Good (Honestly, I don't know what to say so a simple 'good' should do d trick)
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