World Background: Unoriginal Character design: Interesting twist Stability of updates: Like me (aka slow, I'm sorry ahaha) Writing Quality: Certain points could be written better. To anyone who is thrown off by the first person view, note that the story does get better, and that the meta breaks are not as intense or as jarring as the story goes on. Suggestion: please make sure your novel is interesting without relying too much on tropes. Make it original! You are already relying on a world created by someone else. That's all, looking forward for more.
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