Good story! The characters were lovable and very relatable, especially when it comes to the narrative of our protagonist. There are times when her thoughts on what she experience shouts reality and that's very inspiring. You know the majority of the setting and it gives us, the readers, a nice overview of it as the story progresses. You have your own style of writing, very anime-type which works as I see, although I do suggest that you research more on how to write women. So far, nice job! Keep writing and updating!
Nicolas_Cavalieri
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LIKENicolas_Cavalieri:Thanks! I'm not a woman, but I love female protagonists, and hope to keep improving on how to write one. Thanks for your feedback!